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【作文题目】请以“背影”为题,写一篇不少于600字的文章。【题目简析】有朱自清的《背影》做参照,这个题目并不难写,但难在出新。写作时,可以缩小角度,聚焦主人公在特定情境中的特殊背影,比如消防员冲进火海救人的背影、老奶奶拄着拐杖到村口等候久未归家的儿女归来的背影等。【课堂佳作】寒假里的一天,飘着雪,爸爸要外出办事,叮嘱我在家做作业。我站在窗前目送爸爸出门,当看到他那一瘸一拐走路的背影时,禁不住流下了悔恨的眼泪。
[Essay topic] Please “” back of the title, write an article no less than 600 words. 【Topic Analysis】 With “self-portrait” as a reference, this topic is not hard to write, but it is hard to find new ideas. Writing, you can reduce the angle, focusing on the protagonist in a particular context, such as the back of a fireman into the fire sea rescue, grandmother cane to the village waiting for the return of children who have not been home for a long time. [Class masterpiece] Winter vacation in the day, floating snow, my dad to go out to do things, told me to do homework at home. I stood in front of the window to send my father to go out, when seeing the back of his limping walk, could not help but shed tears of regret.