风,是猛烈的,它有时能轰隆隆地把很多很多的物品吹上蓝天,让人怎么蹦跳也拿不到。(这里是不是要分层?起笔写“风”的猛烈,很有现场感。)风是温柔的,它能使人变得凉快,也能使人变得闷热。(再写风的温柔,形成了对比。你小小年纪,写作的手法不错呀!)春天的风,是温暖的,它将花吹开了,使大地万物复苏。(可以略展开一些吗?)夏天的风,是懒惰的,不论人们怎么叫喊就是不肯起床。(这一句好像对应生活不紧密啊!)秋天的风,是凉爽的,它吹红了苹果的脸庞,苹 Wind, is fierce, it can sometimes rumbling many, many items on the blue sky, people can not jump how to get. (Is not there a layering, fierce, dramatic feeling of writing or writing? The wind is gentle.) The wind is gentle, it makes people cool, and makes people feel hot. (To write the gentleness of the wind, in contrast, when you were a young man, writing is not bad!) The spring wind is warm, and it blossoms and revitalizes the earth. (Can you slightly expand it?) Summer wind, is lazy, no matter how people cry is to refuse to get up. (This sentence seems to correspond to life is not close ah!) Autumn wind, it is cool, it blew the apple’s face, apple